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it's such a shame
that we
live
in a world
where the answer is more important
then the question
and the destination more
important
than the journey -

if we can't even
bear
surviving
how do we start
living?
[I had a thought earlier today (also I couldn't think of a title)]
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Medoriko Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
I love the way you structure each line for the poem. It really enhances the meaning when you read because it puts emphasis on certain words/phrases. Very clever. 

Also, the meaning behind this is great. It's simple and to the point. Well done~
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The-Feather-Quill Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :tighthug:
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Medoriko Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
Of course. :heart:
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner May 13, 2014   Writer
Very good. Minimalistic and straight to the point. I like it.
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The-Feather-Quill Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :hug:
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner May 13, 2014   Writer
:thanks:
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slycooperfan Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student Writer
Very thought-provoking. I personally love this :)
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The-Feather-Quill Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :hug:
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